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Rollercoaster by ~dreamernreality:icondreamernreality:

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My thoughts are a rollercoaster
blink
blink faster
heart pounding
thoughts are racing
racing and racing
who will win?
out of control thoughts
so fast I can't pinpoint
my pulse is so high
everything moves so fast
my body is restless
my thoughts are a rollercoaster

the rollercoasted stops

I get off the ride
this ride is closed
for now...
©2005-2008 ~dreamernreality
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Submitted: June 16, 2005
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this one's hard to explain-- i actually wrote this one in history class--and i found it a few days ago and don't really remember writing it...as you can tell my mood was a little wack that day...i know you probably don't understand it but i do...or maybe someone will...so i guess thats all that really matters, right?

i am not sure if this is in the right group or not- i never can tell really and im not to worried about it honestly

please no negative comments on this one

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~lovelyindeed:iconlovelyindeed: Jun 23, 2005, 3:41:14 PM
hey i like your profile pic!
=)
hmm yeah i can relate to your poem..
my thoughts often feel like a roller coaster too

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"Only two things are infinite, the universe and human stupidity, and I'm not sure about the former."
-Albert Einstein
~dreamernreality:icondreamernreality: Jun 23, 2005, 8:57:58 PM
thank ya mam....and yeah those thoughts/emotions can get ya!!!
~drainingraven:icondrainingraven: Jun 27, 2005, 8:50:59 PM
SUBMIT SOMETHING NEW YOU BOOB!
hehe! where's the art at?
i love your comments my dear. thank you for being you.

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there's always a way to forget
once you learn to find your way out
:plug:
~dreamernreality:icondreamernreality: Jun 28, 2005, 11:17:13 AM
lol i'm coming i'm coming- as soon as i can get done with summer school i'll have new submits gallore that you can comment on gallore- yes i just said gallore twice- thats funny you said BOOB because my nickname is boobs-- long story----and thank you for being you
~drainingraven:icondrainingraven: Jun 28, 2005, 2:06:50 PM
when you have the time to type the story i'd like to read it.

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there's always a way to forget
once you learn to find your way out
:plug:
*David-Lister:iconDavid-Lister: Jul 3, 2005, 7:35:46 AM
Stop the world, I want off.

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What the dreamers call cynisism the cynic calls realism. Which world do you want to live in?
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~ShellyBearInk:iconShellyBearInk: Aug 30, 2005, 9:41:35 PM
that's an awesome poem! I totally understand the rollercoaster thing

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when I'm not drawing, I'm not breathing
*David-Lister:iconDavid-Lister: Apr 25, 2006, 8:51:08 PM
It can be hard to keep focus or to stop when certain emotions get a hold of you, but with time you learn where the stop button is.

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What the dreamers call cynisism the cynic calls realism. Which world do you want to live in?
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